The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
Wow! Chilling writing of this spiritual encounter. This is a very creative approach to the topic. You've written this very well!
11/24/07
This reminds me of a Peretti novel. Very nice story telling. Keep on writing!
Laury
Your writing here was very convincing. Good job.
11/28/07
Well, you had me in the grip of your story-telling from the start. Good descriptions of the surroundings and the MC's fear. The sinister figure description is especially scary! Just a few misspellings here and there, but otherwise a very good story.
11/29/07
Wow! Creepy, yet powerful !
Your use of description was great, setting the eerie mood.
I loved the ending, using the Word of God as your weapon.