The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
You have some very nice thoughts in this. I love the verse from I Samuel you quoted about man looking on the outward appearance, but God looking at the heart. Nice writing.
11/24/07
Thank you for sharing this piece. Just one thought: it would really help if you would put a break in between paragraphs so that it's easier to read. Keep on writing!
Laury