The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/07
The number of faked healings, tongues, and prophecy must appal God, and the denial that it happens is sometimes even worse.
11/25/07
You wrote a very nice piece here. A couple of things, though: For the song, maybe you could italicize it to set it off. It would also help to make the dialogue a new paragraph and put a space between paragraphs. All this just makes it so much easier to read. You need to keep writing!
Laury
11/25/07
Oh sorry, I just had to tell you -- I LOVED the ending:)
Laury