The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
Very good--I like your conversational style.
11/24/07
Very nice piece. I'm glad God usually doesn't reveal things in our lives too quickly or we would react exactly as this MC. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
11/25/07
Nice story. I liked how the character was given a little, but not too much information - God knows that we cannot understand or handle too much information "we see in a mirror dimly" now but then clearly. Good positive story.

-Lucie

11/29/07
Congrats on your first win!!!Hope to see many more from you:)