The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
This was an interesting story. If only we listened to our children more often -- maybe then we could hear God better:) Thank you so much for sharing!
Laury
11/24/07
Great story--love the bit with the flames. You did a good job with the dialect, too.
11/24/07
Good job on this story! What a moving message, too! This was my favorite line:
It was one of those moments when God smiles an' says, "Change of plans, son."
11/29/07
Congratulations on your "Highly Commended," Tim! Excellent story!