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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Valentine (05/16/05)

TITLE: Eturnal Love
By Debra Bowers
05/18/05


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To The One I Love, said the card in my hand
From a shelf up above, at the Dollar Store stand.
Two loving birds, a heart on the cover
Sweet sounding words, from one to another
Proclaiming of, what dwells in me
The one I love, eternally.

The verse inside, did please my eyes
Where love abides in gentle sighs
And grows each year, from here to there
In happy tears and loving care.
A husband , father, brother, son,
Loves eternal beloved one.

Words so sincere before my eyes
With prose so clear I realized,
This is the card that I should buy,
To play the bard, to testify
How dear youll always, ever be
Within my heart eternally.

A thought did come, to me this day
About the one, I daily pray.
If I could fly from where I stand
Id place this card within your hand.
For on this day expressing love,
a smile, a kiss, a gentle hug
To thee Dear Lord I pledge my all,
My love for you eternal


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Sandra Petersen 05/24/05
I like this very much. It is difficult to maintain rhythm and rhyme simultaneously, but you did it! Good job!
karen McLamb05/24/05
Wow! This is AWESOME!
Delores McCarter05/26/05
Great....Great....Great!
I love your rhythm, your choice of words, your ability to draw me in and stir me within. Oh, my goodness!!! I would love to read more of your work. You are a seasoned poet, so please consider moving up another level.