The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/05
I like this very much. It is difficult to maintain rhythm and rhyme simultaneously, but you did it! Good job!
05/24/05
Wow! This is AWESOME!
Great....Great....Great!
I love your rhythm, your choice of words, your ability to draw me in and stir me within. Oh, my goodness!!! I would love to read more of your work. You are a seasoned poet, so please consider moving up another level.