The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/07
Clear descriptions and a good message in this piece. Well done.
I would liked to have known the contents of the note - especially since it turned this MC around and back to church. Good story though, and well written!
11/19/07
It is so true that Jesus' blood covers all of our sins. I'm nosy, too, and would love to know what was in the letter, and what she was hiding from the church. If those details were added, your story would be a bit more satisfying to the reader-and make a good story even better!