The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/07
A good analogy here.
11/19/07
I liked this comparison. I can easily relate to waking up and looking in the mirror to see what havoc my hair has created during the night. ^_^ I enjoyed seeing how all that hard work produced something so rare and valuable. What a neat lesson to share. Good writing!
My only note-be careful with double "!" ^_^
11/20/07
Great job encouraging this reader! I loved your lesson on the ruby flaw and the star. This would be a nice devotional. Thanks for this.