The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Now here's an analogy you don't see everyday. ;-D But boy could I relate to your birth story. Ouch!

And you're right - even after the mountaintop - there's usually a little squeezing that needs to be done - for our own good. So stay on the table. Like a brand new mom, you know good things lie ahead.
11/17/07
This is a good devotional piece. Watch your sentence construction, though. A bit of editing and this piece will shine.