The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Wow, I really like your story! I hated to see the end of it. Great job! I'm sure there are many women who are living the life of "does your wife have a name," because some men feel that it is their responsibility to mold or make women, by telling us what to wear, how to wear it, what to buy and when to buy it, what we need and don't need. When this is happening, it is so easy for the woman to lose who she knows she really is.
This is a powerfully told story. Excellent writing! Thank you for sharing this with us.
11/17/07
Sadness and encouragement blended together in one story. This touched my heart.
11/19/07
What a bittersweet story. I felt as if I were there, watching what happened and wishing I could offer some sort of hope to the MC. I'm glad she was able to find some-thank you for sharing this piece. ^_^
Powerful! Excellent writing and detail.
This was excellent. I enjoyed reading it very much. I look forward to reading more from you.
08/13/09
You told me this story, but you didn't tell me the end. It made me weepy. Love it, Joy, and I praise God that you finally found your freedom in Him. Hugs. Cat