The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Oh, I like your last sentence very much - (though I'd throw in a comma after Bible). Really made me chuckle.

Double check capitalization on Bible since it's a proper noun.

I like Emma and I know she'll just go on to encourage others.

Emma's a gem. Keep writing!
11/19/07
I liked Emma's challenge! She sounds like a gal with spunk! Just a tip-"bible" is always capitalized=Bible. This was a good piece, with a nice chuckle here and there. Good job.