The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Good Job! I really liked how you switched "scenes" from a depressed Frank to a Frank with something else on his mind and that something else took him to the place he needed to be....Thanking the Lord. Great story!
11/15/07
The title drew me in and you just kept me reading to see what happened next. Good story.
My husband and I REALLY enjoyed your story! He said he liked it from the very beginning. I enjoyed the twist at the end! Do keep writing. This was an excellent read!
11/16/07
Interesting take on the topic. We never know when we'll be encouraged by someone.
11/19/07
Heehee, what a neat twist at the end. I love your last line and I didn't see where the story was headed, so it was a good surprise. Excellent writing.
11/20/07
You've woven quite a story. I think you've done good with character development. I'm glad Frank received encouragement.
11/20/07
See? Encouragement can come from anywhere, and God can use anyone, or any situation to get us to look to Him again! Your clever twist at the end seems just like real life, and the dialogue, too. Great and unique example of encouragement!
11/21/07
VERY clever and fun. Love the voice. You won't be here in beginners long, I predict. Great detail.