The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/07
I really enjoyed reading this. It flowed very nicely and holds a lot of meaning. Keep writing for the Lord. And, by the way, "Be encouraged."
11/16/07
A sweet story. A suggestion would be to read your writing out loud and listen for awkward phrasing or sentence construction. Feel free to PM me if you want specifics. Keep writing.