The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
You have some good descriptions in this piece.

Paragraph breaks would make it easier to read.
WOW!! that was great! keep it coming.
11/17/07
Detailed and vivid descriptions are all over this piece. It is very creative and interesting to read. Great job!
11/18/07
A wonderful dream and a vivid description. Nice job