The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/07
I enjoyed your story and it seemed like something that God would do in His endless creativity. I thought maybe they were going to fly because of a tornado like in the Twister movie.Is there a chance this was taken from a true story? :) Good work!
Creatively written; do check for minor punctuation/ spelling corrections unless the deadline is approaching fast. Rebecca's conversation seemed very credible. Well done
I really enjoyed this piece. The conversation was realistic, loved the ending. Just a little caution to check spelling and punctuation. Good story. Keep up the good work.
11/14/07
The title caught my attention on this one. Funny story. Nice pace. I just had to keep reading to see what happened. Good work - keep 'em coming!
Great title, fantastic story. Isn't it great how God comes through for us even when we think we've messed things up.