The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/07
I love your title! This is a great entry. I hope more stop by to read it. I really like how you intertwined the two experiences in your life. Great job!
Laury
11/13/07
You wrote this very well. I really like your analogy and won't soon forget it.
11/13/07
What an excellent comparision and well written, too. Good job!!
11/14/07
Very enjoyable devotional. You really made some good points in your entry. The comparisons you made brought your message to the front in very plain terms.
11/14/07
What an blessing to find a flower when you expected a weed. You've woven a beautiful lesson with this. Wonderful writing!
11/14/07
This is a very good way to write a devotional--with a personal anecdote that does the teaching for you. Very nicely done.
Great story and I really enjoyed the smooth way the first folded into the second. The message was nicely done.