The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your story telling. The end seemed a bit rushed or unresolved in a way - but I guess in reality it was.
11/14/07
You brought Jonah to life--complete with his attitude problem and his lack of compassion. I was a little distracted by the use of his name and thought changing some of them to 'he' would have smoothed it out some. You did great tying Romans in with the story--it helps explain it and fill in the 'gaps' I always feel when I read the end of Jonah. Good job!!