The Official Writing Challenge
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Too easy to think of drinking the cup of salvation just once - as for the cup of suffering ...who knew it was one and the same.
Yes we must drink everyday.
Beautifully put. Thankyou
I am touched by the imagery of the somewhat tattered armor and the cautious sips on some days.
Nicely written and enjoyable.
11/14/07
The passion in your voice exudes compassion and love. Well put for sure. If you could find a buddy to go through some of the punctuation that would just give it that much more excellence.

I think your writing is very, very good. :)
I'm still learning, too, so bear with me...

My only 'negative' comment is that I'm not sure it's on topic as is, but I could see it modified to include sharing this faith you express.

That being said, your piece moved me. I REALLY enjoyed reading it. I would like to know your name and follow your writing when possible, please.
Oh! I forgot to say I LOVED the part 'Yes, as recent as...'

It is so true to real life...at least I can relate!
11/14/07
I like your voice here--the sentence fragments make this almost poetic.

Be careful of using tenses and punctuation properly.

Lovely, lyrical writing.