The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/07
Wow! Fascinating piece of sci-fi writing! (at least I hope this is Science Fiction :) ). I can't believe that you're a beginner. The Manat is an interesting "creation". I'll look forward to more entries from you in upcoming weeks!
Good piece. Enjoyed reading it.
11/14/07
I liked the way you "held off" the fact that it was futuristic for awhile, until they went to the library.
At first, I thought the descriptions were metaphors. Interesting...well done.
Fantastic writing Mick! Wonderful, artistic work and important questions raised! You are carving out your niche: Sci-Fi Christian writer extraordinaire.