The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
A tribute to Sunday--what a clever idea!

FYI--You don't need the apostrophe in "Sundays"--it's plural, not possessive. There were also a few places where you left "I" uncapitalized.

I like the pun on Sunday (Sonday) in the title and in the ending of this essay.
This is a great devotional piece. Wouldn't it be amazing to be part of a church body who all sought Jesus with such passion?
Hope all your days are Sondays.
Very nice inspirational message! Keep writing and keep inspiring! ( You may want to round up a challenge buddy who will proofread your work before submitting. There were a few technical errors, but not enough to lose the neat message!
11/06/07
Very punny! Seriously, though, great message packed in here.
You've described quite well what Sunday School should be like. I found the small i's a bit distracting, but it's an easy fix. Love your title. Thanks for this enjoyable read.
You shared a worshipful heart in this "call to worship" devotional.