The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
A good essay--it was at its best at the beginning, with the dialogue, and when mentioning things like painted-over spiders. Keep up that freshness throughout the essay, and you'll really keep your readers interested.
Wonderful that you have so many great memories of Sunday School to hold you over until you are able to be back in a place you obviously love.