The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
What a clever idea--a conversation in heaven!

Some of your punctuation and capitalization of dialogue may need to be edited. For example, this sentence...

“Oh how I love Sunday school.” Said the Father.

...should look like this:

“Oh how I love Sunday school,” said the Father.

There's a comma after the dialogue, and the word "said" is in lower case.

I love the idea that the Father and the Son love Sunday School.
11/07/07
You were very creative with this. After reading this I can imagine some of the conversations between the Son and the Father. Nice writing.
11/08/07
A very creative response to the subject.