The Official Writing Challenge
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Some great imagery here!

I'm not clear on what this poem has to do with the topic of "Sunday School."

Keep writing!
Unlike the previous reviewer, I interpreted your poem to reflect life lived by God as an entire "Sunday School". I could be wrong, of course. Three little points I should mention - 'have opened', 'promised land' and 'spirit's resurrection'. They may be just oversights.