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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Sunday School (10/25/07)

TITLE: Minnions
By Terry Feitknecht
10/29/07


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MINNIONS

I walked into the room, my challenge awaited.

Twenty-five smiling boys with fun in their hearts and ants in their pants.

Jesus was HAY’SEUS.

We must start out with creation as the first Bible story, and tell how God created this world. From the back of the room, from each side of the room, from the front of the room, and all over the room, the ants have taken over.

Continuous movement and a buzz of conversation, and finally, one boy speaks up,

"What about the Big Bang? Didn't we come from fishes?"

"Tommy, that's a really good question."

"But the Bible says, God did it all. Father, Son and Holy Ghost put this whole place all together, and we can believe them because each promise that they make in our Bible always comes true.

The people that think we came from fishes didn't want to think that they would have to pay for their bad deeds and go to hell, because that was too hard. What they should have done, was recognize that they did bad things, and that God had done something special for them, just so He could forgive them.


He sent His Son, not the fishes, to take my punishment and yours. No big bang, just God's plan.

Quiet in the room.

Just think, God loves you so much, he would put your sins on Jesus, His Son, just to save you.

No ants now, just little boys, feeling the tug of an unknown thing pulling their hearts to the water from the spring. The spring of eternal life that bubbles up from Jesus Christ.


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Jan Ackerson 11/02/07
There are some very clever elements here--the ants motif, for example.

I was a bit puzzled by the title--is it supposed to be "Minions?" But that word means "servile followers". Maybe not quite the word you meant?

I like the lively atmosphere and the really good instruction by the Sunday School teacher.
Lynda Schultz 11/05/07
Nicely done. I didn't understand the reason for the title — "Imps", maybe? But this was interesting reading.