The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/07
There are some very clever elements here--the ants motif, for example.

I was a bit puzzled by the title--is it supposed to be "Minions?" But that word means "servile followers". Maybe not quite the word you meant?

I like the lively atmosphere and the really good instruction by the Sunday School teacher.
11/05/07
Nicely done. I didn't understand the reason for the title — "Imps", maybe? But this was interesting reading.