The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely organized essay/devotional and just the right length. A personal experience would move it up a notch for reader involvement. Thanks for the positive viewpoint and for sharing your thoughts.
Concise writing supporting your stance that Sunday School is needed. Could, possibly, leave out the first paragraph? - I lost track of the character, Sandra.
11/03/07
Well-written. I would have liked to read more about Sandra; the first paragraph was very compelling.
11/07/07
Good concepts here, short and to the point. Some of your senteces could have been linked together to make it seem less "choppy" but overall this was a great piece! Keep sharing your writing.