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Creative way to lead into your topic and you carried it through nicely. Good spiritual and emotional content and writing. I noticed one small boo-boo near the end - a who where a that should be - but overall this was an excellent article. Great job!
11/01/07
This had me in tears.
Well done!
11/03/07
This is a very moving story!

This was just beautiful. I really liked how you took events that are happening in our world today and worked them into the story. Well done!
11/05/07
Very nicely done. Great lessons from a very difficult situation.
11/06/07
Wow, this is a truly marvelous piece! From the title to the end, I was captivated with its content. Great work!
11/07/07
Awesome connections with this piece! I loved the whole storyline. Keep up the wonderful writing, he blesses your writing.