The Official Writing Challenge
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Your grammatical usage and literary content are almost flawless. I bit of dialogue and action would spice this up and make it shine.
Great message and the flow of the story keeps things moving without losing the points.
11/03/07
This was wonderful! What a way to intertwine lots of classes into a small piece of work! You did a fantastic job! Keep on writing.
Laury
11/03/07
Thanks for this glimpse into a lively church! Clever title, too.
This was clever. I enjoyed your writing and take on a good healthy SS environment.
Terrific account. What a wonderful way to show how the many volunteers DO gain from their offering of service.
I love the way you told of Sunday school through the eyes of your MC. Great writing!
11/05/07
What a creative perspective. Nicely done.
11/07/07
This was a very assuring piece. I loved it's flow. Good writing!