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Wow! I guess the Word was out :). I love how well you convey the urgency and excitement of the baptism. We really were thinking along the same lines.
10/26/07
Some good descriptions in this piece.
Great piece. Good descriptions and emotions. One oxymoron- picture window. You set a great scene for Biblical time, don't confuse it by using a modern day term. :]
11/02/07
Congratulations, Johnna. In addition to your third place in beginners, your entry also placed 40th overall. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.
Great account of THE baptism.
Congrats on the win.