The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
You have a good start in this piece.

Consider expanding it a bit, showing more of your thoughts and including more detail and some dialogue.
10/26/07
Excellent! I loved the voice - loved the length of sentences and pace. Very well done!!
11/02/07
Congratulations, Joy. In addition to your second place in beginners, your entry also placed 31st overall. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.
Thanks for sharing this story. Congrats on the win.
08/13/09
Super ending on this one - I see too many children getting baptized too young (IMHO) to realize the meaning, importance and significance.