The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Wonderful story with vivid descriptions. The ending seemed too abrupt to me, though.
10/29/07
Excellent. Sometimes it takes an experience elsewhere to appreciate what we have right in front of us. We really are fortunate in this country. Good point.
11/02/07
Congratulations, DeWayne. Your entry placed seventh in Level 1. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.