The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
What a wonderful opportunity! Thanks for sharing this blessed experience. If you separate the story into paragraphs, it will be easier to read.
10/29/07
This is an incredible testimony. Nicely told. Definitely consider double spacing between the paragraphs and maybe even making the paragraphs themselves into shorter ones. It will make reading this even more enjoyable.
Judy your story drew me in and held my interest from beginning to end. I love the little touches of humor and insight into the mom and dad's personality traits and the way you brought the topic to such a satisfying close. Great writing!