The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
It must have been tough to overcome her bad memories and to step forward in faith. I am glad she did. Nice job
10/29/07
This is such a great piece. It is unfortunate that more people haven't read it....it's certainly not a reflection on this story. Good job.
10/30/07
This was a really good. I liked how sprinkled her thoughts throughout.

Be careful of verb tense. You have a few paragraphs where you switch from present tense to past tense.

Great job overall. Keep writing!
11/01/07
I really liked this. Great writing. God bless.
11/03/07
I am sorry I didn't get to this when I reading stories last week.. This is wonderful, I felt the feelings in your piece. Well conveyed thoughts and well written! Great job!