The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
I enjoyed your descriptive narrative. Very well written. You and I were on the same line of thinking as I wrote something similar. See Word was out.
10/25/07
Good descriptions in this piece.
Very imaginative and well told! Good writing and I think should be in the next level up at least..
10/26/07
Very descriptive and it put me right into the scene. Nicely written and a good rendition of a familiar scene.
10/29/07
Lots of imagination and description to go around here. It was easy to place myself smack dab in the middle of this scene. Great job! Loved your ending.
11/02/07
Congratulations, Duwana. Your entry placed sixth in Level 1. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.