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10/25/07
Great story. Thanks for sharing it.
Great testimony of God's working in your life-I assume it's your testimony. I can almost see myself there and feel the holiness of the moment.
10/26/07
Very vivid descriptions and a wonderful testimony. Well written and captivating.
10/27/07
Your story touched my heart and I thought you communicated very well how deeply the 'play' touched your heart also. Great piece.
10/29/07
This was so moving. It is just like that when you are trying to get into character for a role. If you're good at acting anyway. I can only imagine how that must have affected you. Well, I don't even have to imagine since you did such a good job of describing it. Would you consider changing the "higher power" to one of the other descriptions of Jesus if you ever publish this elsewhere? Not necessary, just a little suggestion since I live right in the middle of a bunch of new age churches. I know what you meant, though. REALLY beautiful piece.
11/07/07
You did an excellent job of setting the scene on this.