The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Good idea in this piece and a clever ending. Work on varying the beginning of each sentence.
Quite dramatic! But it gets the point across very well! All our sins are "washed" away and we are "changed" into a new person! Check for spelling with a spell checker or leave for a short while then go back and proof. But quite imaginative and good story!
10/29/07
Extremely creative and powerful story.
10/30/07
Can I just ay wow? I am wordless. Keep up the great writing.
10/30/07
---sorry that was suppose to be "say" LOL Spell check please!
10/30/07
I certainly expected a different ending, but was plesantly surprised. Keep up the writing. The message was very powerful and gives the reassurance of God's love for us.