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10/18/07
Your 4th paragraph is the best, and I'd love to read more on this--when you write these personal reflections, you're more likely to resonate with your readers.

You switched tenses a few times, from present to past and back again. A common error, and easy to fix.

Thanks for taking the time to share this well-thought-out devotional.
10/20/07
Your prayer at the end is moving and shows your kind heart. :)
10/21/07
A very well-thought-out piece. Your heart for the Lord shines here. You express yourself well. Good work!