The Official Writing Challenge
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I agree with Marianne. This isn't a beginner's writing. More advanced. Loved the way you built on your begging sentence. It was a blessing!
05/20/05
Well Done! I really enjoyed this -- a good read! Pat
05/21/05
Interesting. Open form poetry, a very e.e. cummings approach. Will probably look at this a number of times.
05/22/05
Good in the way you manage to portray so much action and emotion.