The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
Love the double meaning of "dish" here, and also the ending, in which you resisted the temptation to neatly fix all of her problems. Very nice.
10/18/07
Your story touched my heart and I found myself getting to know the main character easily. Beautifully done.
This is well written. The message if clear and I liked your MC. Very nice.
10/21/07
Lovely story and a beautiful illustration of fellowship in action. Well done
Loved this...did find one error in "food" washing...but I was captivated as I wondered why she was smelling her clothing and then her struggles of life and then how those around her filled her with joy.
10/23/07
This story was very moving, and you told it extremely well. Good job!
10/23/07
This is very powerful - and I love the title. I really don't know what to suggest, other than possibly a bit more dialog -or even interior monologue for your MC. Wonderful.
10/24/07
I agree that the writing here is very good. Like a few other comments mentioned, maybe a bit more dialogue, but really, it works fine the way it is. I also like that you did not create a perfectly "happy" ending where all her troubles are magically fixed in one sentence. You did a good job, and wrote a creative piece for this topic.