The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
I like the little journal entry, the free verse poem...I think all shy people must feel that way.

I'd like a bit more about why she changed from the first scenario to the second.

I liked this, and felt great empathy for your character.
10/21/07
Great atmosphere and sense of place. Your descriptions are lovely.
10/21/07
I was struck by the serenity in your main character's soul. This was a nice character sketch, and the story evoked a peaceful feeling. Well done!