The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
A pirate allegory! What fun! Fans of this genre will love this one.

There are some punctuation and capitalization problems with your last sentence.

The dialect must have been fun to write!
10/20/07
This was a really fun read!
10/21/07
This was a very cool way to portray this tale! The allegory was plain and the story was very enjoyable. Excellent work!