The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
I really, really like the format that you chose here, and I'd love to see this performed in a worship service.

A few things: it's a bit weak on topic, and there are several mechanical errors that should be edited.

That said--this is one of my favorites so far. Very creative and meaningful.
10/20/07
Oh, how the drama person in me loved this piece! I had goosebumps a couple of times!
10/21/07
I could imagine this being performed! This is very nicely and creatively done. I could almost hear the music!