The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
Creative approach--thanking God for fellowship in the form of a prayer.

A few little hints--avoid exclamation points, especially in titles. And I think you meant "passed away" instead of "pasted away."

This gave me a warm feeling, almost as if I knew these lovely people.
10/20/07
This moved me.
10/21/07
a wonderful account of a humble prayer. Very nicely done.
10/24/07
I love the way you expressed how we can see Jesus Himself in the faces of others. If only we would take more time to look....