The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
I suspect that there are a lot of people who could tell a similar story to Dave's.

Work a bit more on "showing, not telling..." Help us to see what Dave is seeing, hear what he's hearing, etc.

Lots of good word choices in this entry.
10/19/07
I suspect that there are a lot of people who could tell a similar story to Dave's.

Work a bit more on "showing, not telling..." Help us to see what Dave is seeing, hear what he's hearing, etc.

Lots of good word choices in this entry.
10/21/07
A very heartwarming testimony of the Spirit of God that will not let us go. I enjoyed reading this.