The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/07
A nice tribute to Jeff; if this is nonfiction, I hope you share it with his wife.

Be careful of grammatical errors, particularly tense shifts and comma splices.

This was a creatvie approach to the topic.
I have cold chills as I read this. I would have like to have known him. Perhaps you could have expanded on his life and influence a tad bit more. I agree, if this is true, share it with his wife.
10/21/07
A lovely tribute to your friend and a testimony to the fellowship you shared. Nice work