The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/07
You described the setting vividly; I could imagine being there.

In your second paragraph, you should put each speaker's dialogue in a separate paragraph.

This is a great message for us all to remember.
10/21/07
Amen! Love the comment by the little boy. Such a heartwarming message; told simply but eloquently. Nice job.