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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Fellowship (among believers) (10/11/07)

TITLE: Coins and Knees
By Sharon Henderson
10/16/07


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“Mommy, what do coins and knees have to do with people getting along at church?”

“Coins and knees? Hmmm… Where did you hear that coins and knees have something to do with people getting along?”

“Mrs. Gregory, my Sunday School teacher said so. She said we need coins and knees to enjoy being with our friends at church.”

“She did, huh? Well, let’s see if I can guess what she meant. Coins are a way to give money to the church so we can have a place to gather and we use our knees when we kneel to pray and we should pray together. So maybe giving coins and kneeling on our knees brings us together so we all get along better. Does that sound something like what Mrs. Gregory said?”

“NO! No MOM! She said we need to have coins and knees so that we can have friendships at church.”

I am baffled. What is my sweet daughter trying to share with me? Coins and knees? Maybe she misunderstood. Once she asked me to sing the “Laundry Song” about the sheets. It took me a while to realize that she thought “Bringing in the Sheaves” was “Bringing in the Sheets”. Then there was the time she thought God’s name was Art based on the first line of the Lord’s Prayer. What can she be trying to say this time?

”Honey, did your teacher say anything else? Did she teach you anything else about coins and knees?”

“NO MOM! All she said was that we really need coins and knees to have something called fellowship that means we are getting along together and having fun at church!”

Coins and knees.
Get along together.
Fun at church.
Fellowship.

Why does this odd combination sound vaguely familiar to me?

Coins and knees.
Coins and knees.
Coins and knees.

Wait a minute. In college we did a study on Christian fellowship and we learned a new word. Well, it wasn’t a new word, just a new word for us. Oh, yes, now I remember. Koinonia. I guess to a seven year old, koinonia indeed sounds like coins and knees.

“Sweetie? I think I found your answer….”


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Kristen Hester 10/18/07
This is such a cute story. Kids say the funniest things. This is a very clever "fellowship" entry. Very creative. Your writing and dialogue is fresh and clear. Great job!!!
Paula Titus 10/18/07
Simply delightful! :)
Jan Ackerson 10/20/07
I enjoyed your voice in this charming story.
LauraLee Shaw10/23/07
I enjoyed the creativity of this piece. It was refreshing!
Beckie Stewart10/23/07
I figured this out, but this was sooooo fun to read.
Marilyn Schnepp 10/23/07
Great hint. But what in the world is "koinia" or whatever? Loved the story, and couldn't wait to find out what it meant...but was disappointed when I didn't know what it meant either. lol. Very well written and kept my interest throughout. But then? Stumped. (smile)
Marty Wellington 10/23/07
Nicely done--succinct dialogue kept the story moving and showed typical child-like understanding of words. Very nice twist on the topic.
Joanne Sher 10/23/07
Definitely cute and fun - kids are ALWAYS great for a challenge entry. Bet this was fun to write.
Dee Yoder 10/24/07
Well, this is such a great little story! Very sweet and I love the way you gave examples of the child's past misunderstandings-so funny. I guessed, too, about the word, but it didn't matter because the dialogue and flow of the story kept me reading right along.
Karen Wilber 10/24/07
I could hear the child's voice growing more exasperated. Nice pacing. I knew what she was trying to say from the beginning but I still wanted to find out how mom would figure it out. This brought a smile to my morning.
Betty Castleberry10/24/07
Charming and fun. You did a great job with this.
Joy Faire Stewart10/24/07
This is well written and a delight to read.
George Parler 10/24/07
A very pleasant read. Good job.


   
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