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10/20/07
Your first paragraph was a great hook, and the whole entry well-written and moving.
10/21/07
What a perfect example of true Christian fellowship. I love that first paragraph - especially the "pant size" comment. What a hoot! You also touched me deeply with the special fellowship you described. Lovely.
10/23/07
I have just recently met 3 different families that has lost their children in similar circumstances to you. It is hard to know what to say and do and this story has at least given me some hope that friends can be of a great blessing.
Perhaps this story could be told by unfolding this emotional time as you were there when you just had held your grandson in your arms, helping us to know what you were going through.