The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful imagery!
Fellowship has many facets like almost everything...
Very gripping piece contrasting the joy and freedom of the child at the end with the grief of the parents. Fellowship isn't always necessarily joyful, is it?
10/20/07
Excellent, excellent writing, with a unique voice and a definite style.

The only thing that confused me--and this is very minor--is the "I" at the end. POV switch?

This may well be the best on this level--simply superb.
10/20/07
Your writing captivated me. The last paragraph left me a little confused, but still the best I have read so far :)
10/22/07
We really need to get some sort of symbol for stories that need a box of kleenex! Powerful stuff here, hope you are not the one with the loss but if you are God blesses you. Great pictures written here, I totally connected. Keep up the great writing!
10/22/07
I also loved the images here, especially at the end. Very touching and powerfully written. Great work!