The Official Writing Challenge
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Very intrigueing writing. It's unique perspective is a kind of song in itself. We are all like sparrows in God's hand.
10/20/07
Lovely!
A perspective I would not have thought of and admire how you can do this in poetry.
10/22/07
Elequent! Well done. I felt peaceful as I read this. Thanks for sharing.
10/22/07
The images are powerful but I had a bit of trouble discerning your complete meaning. Your poetry is lovely.