The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/07
Very vivid - I especially liked this line "The music draped over her soul like a freshly dried blanket, warm and comforting."

Great job!
10/15/07
Very nice telling of this story. I think your title is great and I like your verse at the end.
10/15/07
I could feel the awesomeness of God's presence as I read this. Well put together.
10/15/07
Very good. I felt like I was in that worship service!
Laury
As I read, I felt this came from the author's soul. I was touched by the piece.
10/17/07
Very beautiful images of a worship service and a hungry heart finding the Lord's table full and waiting. I especially like the last line. Very nice way to end this story.